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Review of a thought  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
ahh damn you are so damn sweet thank you so much baby that is the best one yet

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Review of Meeting Jesus.  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a really good poem my friend it looks like you know who you need and yet the struggle withins seems to be winning. i can understand this personal struggles are an everyday part of life i like how you used puncuation to emphasize feelings and get certain point acros s job well done thank you.
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Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i really like this. and i like roses and what they can symbolize. many colors and meanings though can be very confusing to those who do not know. i hope to read some more from you and review more in the mean time please feel free to check out my port. thankyou
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Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a nice use of sense stimulation im tasting cherries and vanilla thats for sure. very nice thank you
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Review of The Banshee  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
very nice i like it good job
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Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
um yes the death of friend s and loved ones alike is the hardest thing to deal with. i ve stared death in the face hun and i won. poetry is the key to that victory, but remember this, that no all of your questions will be answered. and some are better lef that way!!!! i wish you the best thank you for the poem.
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Review of Life After Death  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
you lnow this is very intense, and i like how it doesnt follow any pattern or format. this is how writing from the heart is, no strained lines and verses just flows right out . writing from the heart is the key to poetry because if you have to think about it then it shows and it becomes a bit annoying. i like this thank you
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Review of The Best  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
yes i do like it i hope to read when you are finished unless this is all you are very good keep up the good work
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Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
very good. relationships are a tricky thing and unless they are right they leaves us empty and wantimg for something. i hope you fell better soon but keep up the good work
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Review of Missing you...  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
ive said it before that sucg few can say so many things that is why i love poetry. i appreciate these few line because they are so big thank you
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Review of 100 Miracles  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes Indeed The Promise of happines id definatley ellusive exspecially when you seek it with substance.very good
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Review of Trust Me  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh awsome!!!!!!!! How many times have we heard od this struggle? Yet everytime i read a different version is aw inspiring. This is by far the best poem i have read on here so far please keep up the great work. and check out my poems as well. thank you
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Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
very sattirical. very well put. you have a knack for sattire. keep it up
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Review of for Rita Dove  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
this poem if very well ascribed. i like the humor and the wit. maammas kitchen is a beautiful to those who have to eat. i can only imagine what i would have done without one. but i do like the poem very well. the short fast lines are my favorite. thank you and good lick
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Review of Memories  Open in new Window.
Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the poem. but you could extend some of your verses to make them flow easier. some of them feel strained. when you write relax a little theres no hurry. very good job though keep it up
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Review by carpenoctum Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the mystery and mystique. many ways to view this one.thanks and very good
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