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Review by Lexi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very creepy. Chilled my bones. Keep writing. :)
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Review of The First Battle  Open in new Window.
Review by Lexi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Amazing poem!!!! I hope you write more, i'll be reading your future entries. :DDD
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Review of Shooting Stars  Open in new Window.
Review by Lexi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wouldn't change anything. I love the idea, the imagery, and the message. Fantastic job. :D
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Review of Vanishing  Open in new Window.
Review by Lexi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it. It's a nice little piece. I think the shortness of it actually makes it better. It enhances the "vanishing" effect. It's good. :)
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Review of Hopeless.  Open in new Window.
Review by Lexi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very very VERY good. I would give it 5 stars, but there are many grammar errors and misspellings. Also parts of it flow better than others, causing your story to speed up and slow down. But it was an amzing piece. :DDD
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Review of Circus.  Open in new Window.
Review by Lexi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
The beggining is weak, the middle is good, the ending is great. They're all so different in quality that it chops up your story into sections, not letting it flow. Work on the first part and make it just as emotional and evoking as the ending, and it will make this piece outstanding.
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