H-Man's (dolphbrent) Reviews

H-Man

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11 Public Reviews Given

11 Total Reviews Given

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#3955258

Review of Alone

Review by H-Man

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi I'm H-man.

I want to say your poem was amazing. I like the way you represented emotion with the seasons, and the description you gave by using, so few words. I want to say as a poet myself that you have a very good work, and hope you continue. As i was once told when I first started on here: "Don't try to rhyme, so hard.". I feel as a poet that is one of the hardest thing to do, because poetry is a expression of our emotions. We as humans usually judge ourselves for expressing our emotions, and poetry is a key to let them loose. I also love your style of expressing yourself in, so few words which is really rare in poets. I would like to request adding punctuation in a expressive way to brighten up your poems, to flare off your wild emotion. Keep up the good work :)

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#3955123

Review of The Parable of The Deadly Virus

Review by H-Man

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really liked your description, and your ability to categorize your thoughts in the story. I feel that maybe digging into detail of how bad the disease was, and how excruciating the pain was. All in all. Great work :)

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#3670121

Review of Canvas Of My Heart

Review by H-Man

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I loved your poem because of all the beautiful and extravigant words that you spoke in your mind releasing it upon the paper. Then upon a great place such as this to express it in such warm feelings with great enthusiasm. good work and great job

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#3649630

Review of A collection of short poems

Review by H-Man

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I have to say that i absolutly love your poems. They were mind blowingly brilliant and elegant. Your metaphore scheme was pretty impressivly pulled off. I just noticed you miss spelled a few words that you had used. Despite that simple mistake wich was probably typer error i honor your work and hope that you continue. I have given you a 5 as a rating because i believe that you are extrordainary and want you to continue. If you have any questions comments or concerns write me back. I would also like it if you would be willing to give an honest judgement on some of my poems. Thank you for your time and im glad we still have mental artist that are still left in this governmentaly decaying world.

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#3612552

Review of Paper Doll

Review by H-Man

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This is a good start. I like the initiative that you have put into this work of art. It went perfectly well together. you should try to put it in a ryming poem form to see your true potential and send it to me and i will review it and tell you what i think.