This was both funny and seasonal. You have a knack for poetry, one I lack. Keep up the great work. I almost feel bad for the singer. I mean, ain't too often, I hope you deal with a being behind a horse who has a bad case of backside blowout. Well, hope you keep honing your talent
This was pretty well done. It was touching that he kept this memento of his grandpa, even if in the end it was, as expected, just a commericial selling decoder ring. I like how you built up to the main character finding it, buried away in his closet underneath piles of clothes and other assorted items, and then give emphasis to it.
Hmm, these our interesting so far. I like how each link like, tells its own story. Those stories that got awarded, in my opinion, deserved them. They are really well written. Janus gets his superpowers was, in my opinion, one of the better written ones, as its a fleshed out tale.
I loved this. I enjoy Post-Apocalyptic fiction, especially well written post-Apoc. This gave me S.T.A.L.K.E.R or Metro series vibes, the books or the games for Metro. I liked how you had the two interact. It can at times be hard to write works, even short ones, set in a "bottle episode" style format, or with only a few characters, but I think you pulled it off. If this becomes a full work, I hope to read it.
This was really well done. This Mr. Roscoe character seems nice enough. I like how you made him a genuinely decent guy, rather than someone preying on her feelings, or by pretending to be a kind and decent man. I liked how well you characterized Ruby. While she does appear to be hesitant, and not great with people, you show she tries.
This was really well written my guy. I like how the idea for this hypothetical system was played out. You covered the basics, and any possible fallbacks. The writing, from what I saw, didn't have any overt errors. Honestly, I would love to see something like this become a reality. Keep up the good work writing
I gotta say man, this was simple, yet very cute. It really does capture what most kids would probably be thinking in that age whenever they reach a milestone like wearing underwear
I love this interactive. The amount of options in this is staggering. I love how you can choose a character from the show, and then decide why they get padded. I oh so love adding to this tale. Hope it continues!!!
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