What an interesting topic! You were able to create a small piece of art revolving around the unseen. Reading threw the perspective of the young boy gave me the determination to prove that this was indeed a blue apple. While everyone around doesn’t, you can stand up for what you belive in even if you are alone. Some of the characters seemed to have that stereotypical personalities: The dad and the brother. Great descriptions for the apple. The story also had a sense of what the group can belive in contrast with the individual. The majority see this as no apple at all, well, no blue apple. The individual boy sees it for what it truly is. Overall, this was a fun and unique story to read!
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