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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, I found this on the sponsored link page and I think its fantastic. The title drew me in and I wasn't sure to expect. I don't undestand the link to the baker's dozen but I got the idea of the inspirations, thats very clever. The whole bakers dozen thing always has a certain eerieness to me anyway.
Back to the poem, I think the descriptions and the images it provokes are great, if you didn't put too much time into this, its great anyway, I wouldn't change it! I like the tone, style and pace of the poem. Would love to know what the word of inspiration was!
Great job!
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