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Review of Light One Candle  Open in new Window.
Review by Aaron Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good. Inspiring enough and I love any writing that tries to be positive in a way that feels different. Most of the time "positive" writing simply panders to popular culture trends that everyone will certainly agree with. You did not do that. Some will write this off as a little corny so be careful and the language is not particularly vivrant. I have only read a few pieces, but this is the best one that I have read so far.

Maybe try for some more vivrant language. By the way, I don't grade high, so 3.5 is high for me.
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Well written and nicely felt. Raise the stakes. I know you're getting at a certain mood, but try and raise the stakes for your readers. I say that because a lot of people's writings feel the same. Try to distinguish your writing from other people's.
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