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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I truly enjoyed this story. It grabbed my attention from the beginning. The characters were described well and very believable.

The story moved at a good pace, moving faster as the main character became more anxious. Slowing down as he slowed down.

And what a great ending! Cudos to you.
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