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#2164214

Review of Timeless

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

Well all is really not clear... Could have been much more discriptive...
But offcourse great theam and great work too...
Keep up the good work..
Cheers...

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#1899880

Review of Helluland

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

What vivid description you made... Good choice of words... Well you could have made the whole thing a bit more relaxed... I don't know but I feel it's really very dense... missing the real meaning of it... may be I am wrong... but try revising..
Great Deed
Ragards
Dews

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#1899292

Review of Homeless Woman

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

On "Homeless Woman" - Cool! Great Deed... Great Theme... Simple and powerfull....
Although you could have rhymed s bit more... added some ornation... see if you can do that wihtout changing the essence of it.. otherwise leave it as it is!
Keep writing
Regards
Dews
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#1898263

Review of One and Another

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Great did! Wonderfull story...
Keep your good work
Ragards
Dews

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#1898260

Review of Missing You

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is excellent Really cool....
Great did
great incite
keep up writing and adding to your huge collections of love poems!
Regards
Dews

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#1898209

Review of Denial

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Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

Cool! although you could have made this to end in a gracefull manner... Just add a few lines before the last para...
great writing
Dews

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#1898181

Review of To do unto you

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Rated: E

| (2.0)

Well great Poem Demetria! A real reaveling one! You see you might add some indententaion so as to make it look having some structured as pharagraph!

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#1556612

Review of Half

Review by dews

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Great! annastasie... What a theme and the way you presented it.... excellent... It's really very compact... at times few words forming phrase would express so much... like I liked:-
"Nothing stretched into years"
" She knew that the other half of the house must have been destroyed too"
"They did not see each other, could not see each other, but looked anyway."
"They did not know each other, could not know each other, but once they had been one, and now the two halves were clinging to one another for dear life."
... few of this speaks to me much subtler meaning!
Try addin some more imagery...
Can I interpret all this like this
"If not love... Life keeps them together"
and what Irony!