Love it! I'm not very good at these, but this is sweet and to the point. Keep going, I think authors that can write their thoughts in the least amount of words are truly talented.
This was a pretty good interactive, kept under control unlike some. There were obviously grammar issues and spelling mistakes throughout, but everybody has those problems at some point. The premise was very creative, and wasn't like most size-changing/gain interactives. good job.
I really enjoy this body swap story, ever since I first discovered it a few months ago. My favorite story lines are the Disney ones where they then go into pageant/TV business, the vacation one with the couple, where they share the pregnancy at the end, and the single woman. Sometimes I feel that a few chapters "repeat" over different story lines, but overall it's a good, creative variety of stories.
I wasn't a fan of the story line with the family becoming dogs, but I'm sure there's some out there that like it. All I can say is keep writing, because I know you have at least one fan out there. Check out my story at "Wishing Stone"!
This is one of the better wishing adventures that I have read here on writing.com. While some of the chapters seem to be the same, even while on a different story line, I really enjoy all the variety offered in the story. Furthermore, I also like the way that the wishing isn't always controlled by the character. The randomness and chaotic nature of the wishes makes the story less predictable and more exciting. Good work, but maybe work on chapter length. Check out my story "Wishing Stone"!
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