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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the lofty nature of your work. Seems happy and free within. I can feel the life of the snowflake. I think a bit more personification of the snowflake would be nice. Give it more life and a essences of its own. But that is jst my humble opinion.
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Review of The Condemned  Open in new Window.
Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think it is a great portion of a story. I am not sure if it is a story in making or not, or if it is a completed piece, but I want more!! But you were able to utilize dialogue to its full advantage. I am often discouraged by people and their writing skills when it comes to dialogue. But you have clearly outlined who is speaking. Well done!
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Review of Mirror me  Open in new Window.
Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoy this piece. What I take from it is about a girl trying to be something and capture beauty, but since she feels ugly on the inside, this is no easy task to accomplish. I have tragically seen many girls try to hide themselves behind veils and makeup.
But this pieces remains an excellent. I like when someone reads a piece and they can pull their own meaning from it and make it relivant to their. At that point writing is no longer writin - It is Art!
Your paint brush has crafted a great piece, and I applaud you!
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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is quite good and it reminds me of a piece I wrote called "Forget not the Treachery." It is grea to see someone sending their love out to someone that has left to defend our nation. I know first hand how it can be to be overseas and away from everything and everyone you love.
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Review of Blight white  Open in new Window.
Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the play on words you utilize throughout the piece. It tends to dance in my mind the word choices you used. Very creative indeed.

Your structure is qute good as well. I have yet to see such a pattern unleashed as this bold one.

The use of white as a reversed metaphor is great. How often do you see that. Greatly delivered and cannot wait to see more of your work!
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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This hit chords with me. the piece is quite good. I cannot help but think how many times I have tried to make a firiend into a lover. i have tried the reverse too. But that is just too much to do do at times. Tends to be the people that love the other person the most is the one overlooked in most instances. Funny how the heart seeks out people that are just not going to come around to you.
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Review of A Christmal Love  Open in new Window.
Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great piece all and all. I liked it a lot!! A great little story of how an angel sat atop the christmas tree all alone and scared. But her hero came along to her rescue and she was not alone after all. I can relate to this piece quite a bit. Us toy soldiers often try to rescue our angels.
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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I find this piece to be intriguing and very well crafted. I love how you used rhymes within the same line. Many poets cannot pull that off very well but you did it nicely. "When I see mine own,
Entangled and strangled in withered branches," is what i notice most. It gives great life and paint great imagery!!
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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is quite an amazing piece. It reminds me of one of my pieces I did named "Much To Late So Soon" It has a similar message, although you took a way different approach. It sounds like the hopelessness we all feel sometimes with those we loveand cherish.
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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Quite an extraordinary piece. I love how you made the words form the shape of a christmas tree. That was quite an interesting way to incorporate ASCII artwork into your writing. I like also how you also included different color text to make it look as though it had ornimates. Great all around!
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Review of Dinner  Open in new Window.
Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
It i quite imaginative. Very simple, but yet quaint.
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Review of Rustle of Silk  Open in new Window.
Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It is a great piece, I would to see it get extended on. I love your writing, you are definitely talent to say the least. Keep up the great work!!
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Review by mikey4madness Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I marked you down for only its length, I would of loved to see it expanded on. Great wording though. It defenitely touches me.
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Review of Close To Tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is quite a remarkable piece with incredible flow. i can defenitely see why you placed 2nd! Very well done!
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