Its kind of interesting, but the story board is somewhat unorganized and some words are misspelled. On the other hand, I like how you capitalized some words and you got what you want, it made big impact on us the readers to feel it more. Well it is great your not abusing others and yourself now. Thank you for sharing a message that everyone has a chance in life. Again thanks and write on!
I like your poem a lot, it doesn't have rhymes or equal syllables in each lines and stanzas but it provides loaded story and I can't help but to read further. You compiled many emotions in this poem in which I think is amazing. Hope to see more of your work. Write on!
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