Wow! What an amazing story. I had planned on reading it and eating my lunch at the same time, and that just didn't happen. I started reading then became very interested as the sound appeared. The way you ended the story, not finding out what the sound was, then waking up in his dorm to hear another sound, very interesting and a great way to end. I'd love to read more short stories from you, please keep up the very good writing. You had me captivated the entire story.
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