Now I have to find time to read the rest of what you've writen so far. :) I like the setup for the story. I can visualize the fighting and can even feel it. I look forward to reading the rest of the story--or at least what you've finished so far.
Wow! This is a very powerful story! I felt like I was there. I could feel and see the fear, devastation, love and hope while reading it. I'm wiping tears as I write this review.
Keep up the great writing. I look forward to reading more of your work. I just hope it doesn't all make me cry. ;)
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