Very good!! It made me ubderstand a little of what our fighting men and women go thru overseas. It made me feel like I was there. Also, made me stop and really think of what Americans take for granted. Thank you for serving. Thank you for writing this also and letting me read it.
Very short. good start for a short story, but needed something just a little extra to see where the author is going. Thank you for letting me read this.
Thank you for letting me read this. I have wondered myself what death or dying may be like. I think you have captured feelings on what someone may go thru. The piece really makes me stop and think about what it really is to actually be at death's door.Overall, I think you wrote a good piece and if you write more, I really would like to read it. Thank you
I would like to become a member of your group. I just began with a free membershiup, but want to upgrade. I hope to have something in my portfolio in the near future. I love reading and writing and would a very involved member. Hope you will consider me
This was an interesting piece to review. It has a little historical hint in it, the story itself was good. It moved on, was not dragged down by a lot of detail and took something that was used for evil and made it into something good. Overall, the story line was something that could very well be expanded on.
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