I enjoyed the ending, the old mans comment on when his position will be switched. Also I liked the little side track in the middle aobut how we don't know anyone because the mind is always hidden even though the tounge speaks for it. The set of who sat where on the topic was extrodinary, simply a twinkle in the old mans eye was enough to tell me that he knew more than the young man did but that wasn't revealed until the end after the young man left. I enjoyed it.
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