That was a very exciting short story, the mouse met danger at every turn! I don't think he is truly free, though...there are a whole new set of predators looking for a tasty mouse in the night...I think this story could potentially go on forever. The life of a mouse is a never-ending adventure! Thanks for sharing!!
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