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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, just gonna start with this:I don't usually like vore stories. Luckily, I don't consider this a typical "vore story". Vore stories are usually vore with "some" story, while this is a story with "some" vore. And I really like the basic premise of the story, as well as the resolution. Heck, one of my favorite things about this story is that it actually HAS a resolution to the conflict. I've not read too much of the extended arcs, but I really like the solace one(the branch with Serena, not the weird one.). I've always liked the "walk a mile in their shoes"(do micen even wear shoes?) scenario. It's great for character development. Honestly, I almost didn't read the extended arcs. The chapter select listed the choice as "screw the story, I'm here for vore!", and that almost made me ignore them entirely...until I saw in the outline a chapter titled "paying respects". I clicked it out of curiosity...and I've gotta say 3 things about this chapter. 1:...wow...just...wow...I honestly almost cried. 2:I read this before I knew for certain that Wite and Rim made the monument. But when I actually went back and read that, I was like "well, someone better pick up that phone. because I called it!". 3:Serena is quickly becoming my favorite character. Anyway, this is the first time I've reviewed, or done anything on writing.com really, I don't know if the reviews can be replied to like the ones on fanfiction.net. But, at the risk of boring you to death with my ton of questions, Imma just leave off with one and maybe ask the rest later. Was Grimlock named after the Transformer?
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