Great story. I read every word. The little red imp is hilarious and this should be like one of those short one hour movies or something. Or even a whole novel if possible. Never the less, its a great short story! And was very entertaining!
Great story. A really good example of the classic war sacrifice. I also liked the fact that in this world you have made, you include not only humans, but were-wolfs, and cat-like people. Awesome!
Very nice! I liked the twist in the end. It really had me going. I did NOT expect that would happen. I gotta admit, i got cold chills after those last few sentences! GOOD JOB!
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