nice poem. i am getting the whole idea about tomorrow changing for 'you' and 'me'. and i also get the whole idea about how the rest of the poems is just to make you think about changing your actions. i think that this is a very nice peom. but unfortunatly, i'm just not feeling it. i'm not the best poet in the world, but this just doesn't jump out at me. keep up the work though, i'm sure it jumped out at other people.
very nice writing. i loved all of it. not too much description to make it boring, but enought to get a visual picture. i seen the whole story in my mind as if it were playing on a screen. the ending is a real shocker. i had to go back and reread the last paragraph or two to get the whole effect. keep up the good work.
awesome!! i loved every word. it's a great story and great concept. very well written. it kept me on the edge of my seat. there was just a few typos though, take you time and reread it and you will find it. i'm off to read the rest. keep up the excellent work.
i absolutely loved it!!!! you had me hooked on the story right from the beginning!! i can't wait to read more of your stuff! if everything is as good as this, you'll be an excellent writer.
although, i'd love to know what happened to Rudy. i'm sure Carrie left his sorry ass, but it would be good to know.
is this poll for a research thing, or just because you were bored? i'm not sure of how old you are, the closest thing on the list to my age is bambi, and even that came out as i was born. i've heard of old yeller, rikki tikki tavi, but i've never heard of where the red fern grows.
nice poll. it's a good way to try to get to know the age range of the people that are reading and reviewing our work. from the looks at it, at the time i took the poll, most of the people on here are younger than me, and i'm only 22! i love taking little polls that really don't serve a purpose, keep it up.
such a sad, sad poem. but i loved every word of it. it sucks to lose a loved one, especially to something like cancer. i could totally feel you pain through your words. it brought tears to my eyes. illness is such a hard part of life. there are times when everyone wishes they could take the place of a sick loved one.
i think the word search was great. i don't know you, but it contains lot of words that describe someone that i would like to get to know. i feel that word searches and little personal games like these are a great way to get to know a person. and this puzzle really puts an inside glance at stuff you like.
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