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Review of A Poetic Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Darlin ~ Writer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WoW! I really do mean WoW!!

         I am so very sure that you have had several FANTASTIC reviews, if not hundreds of them to this Perfectly Worded & Utterly Inciteful Piece that sparks to life a small glow upon the dark area's of a brilliant writers mind, heart, and soul. Too many are the extravagant compliments I would give for this piece, while praising them with quite lavish contentment. For sophistication purposes I will try to refrain from embarrassing myself with such intense glee over this piece and try to review it from a simple writers perspective. Yet, what are writers except extremely personal instruments when it comes to expressing and receiving the written word.

The perfection of this piece, as I am sure you are aware, is staggering in it's reality. You have put into words what all writers, from beginning idea scratchers, to established word mongers & published literacy perfectionists feel. In short phrases such as;

An emotional outlet,
a chance to be free
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and
A poetic expression,
a story to tell.


         You have expressed the drive, hunger, ambition, and need to write. For which in a writers life, if we are not allowed or just don't write every moment of everyday, with every chance our bodies are able; with the free flow of a flood, the Hell of which you speak is where we condemn ourselves. When writing and creating is as simple as breathing it can be like the sweetest of Godly nectars; yet when, for whatever reason, the dam of frustration hold back our life giving force,... well you put it so perfectly in your words here.

Sometimes it’s like heaven,
sometimes it’s like hell.

and
Don’t sit and judge me,
for my words have no voice.
It’s a born infliction,
not of my choice.


         Your words are simple, precise, and perfectly spot on! This is so perfect for any form of writer, especially those that don't write to live, But Live To Write! I am so glad that I stumbled upon the perfect piece for I shall remember it always and grasp the strength of the words, the heart of the subject, and the light with which you have put at the end of my tunnel!! Thank you so very much and I will be reading more from you.

Live with your Heart, and never stop writing from your soul!


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Review of Dear God  Open in new Window.
Review by Darlin ~ Writer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
         I think you expressed so very beautifully the hardships we all need help from our heavenly father for. I found it beautiful and well written and reminded me of a psalm. My favorite words were:

Give us the knowledge to remember to kneel down and pray,
not only when we need you but each and every day.


         Those words meant so much to me as that is, above the rest, the hardest thing for me to remember. Thank you so much for sharing and I am so glad I got to read this beautiful peace.
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Review of Undone  Open in new Window.
Review by Darlin ~ Writer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Short, Strong, and Straight to the point! A nice poem!


         I liked the poem and thought it was straight to the point and nicely worded. It sounded a bit familiar to me, not sure why but it did. Yet as familiar as it sounded I thought the way you worded it and the fact that you kept each line and stanza short made it different than what I am used to. All in all I really liked it and look forward to reading more of your work! Thanks for posting and look forward to more of your work!

Keep living with your heart and writing with your soul!!
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