This story manages to perfectly mix entertainment with education. It takes a little-known chronic illness (ulcerative colitis, in this case) and makes you aware of the impact it can have on normal people's lives. Healthy people don't have much reason to contemplate what those who don't have their health are going through, and this story reminds us all to stop and be thankful for what we have.
This story is excellent. It makes a strong impression in very few words, besides being almost impeccably crafted from the point of view of grammar/style. It starts out interesting but innocent, only to nail the reader in the end with a shocking twist. I have no critique. I can't wait to read more from you.
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