I really love the flow of this poem. It's smooth and enjoyable to read. Very great rhyming style and the title fits well as well. Very easy understanding and without confusion. Did I mention my love for this title...I just love that, Moonbeams and Monkeys! Great job with your overall work!
I really enjoyed reading your little poem. So much true words in such a small piece. I automatically thought Wal-Mart when I read this and the people standing outside the doors taking donations from the Salvation Army. You did a marvelous job on this and I really enjoyed reading it since Christmas is so near. Keep up the work, this is def your kind of style.
Very great rhyming, just means the start to excellent writing ahead! Another thing, I love the title to your poem very on point for this poem! Excellent job!
I really enjoyed your story. I read every single line because it was interesting from the start. We don't realize as kids that what's happening around us will be important to us when we grow up. It impacts us in such a way...it just takes time for us to make it a memory. What a great Christmas story you have written.
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