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Review by Danola Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)

This was a very good narrative for all of us attempting to find happiness, you summed up the game of live perfectly. I like your phrase in the sit para: "in life, happiness is the game; not the final score" very direct statement love it.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Very interesting writing. It took me a minute to realize these were animals living in New York. Liked the term "he put on his best airs" I had never heard that term before. Keep writing your wonderful.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW, this was incredible erotic and great writing. To short but I read it 3 times and ech time this gets better. more please.
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