Very good! I was captivated from the beginning, and I couldn't wait to see what became of the three gentlemen climbing the treacherous mountain. Also, I couldn't help but notice a few spelling errors, but that can be fixed with a bit of editing. I believe the ending was my favorite part, considering you turned such a high-strung, exciting climax into mere child's play.
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