I also think Hillary is a better chose but I think the third party is an enough better chose but again that's just my own thought. to be honest I didn't read it all the way through I manly just schemed through it but I did notice you made some really good points which I admire and one more thing you know by posting that you might actually get hate from this post. but I'm not hating
I love how deep you get into your story. I can tell this took awhile to write this. By reading this I feel like I'm looking right into your soul like I can see a little more about you without actually knowing you. but I can also see you have things under control
I really like your story. I also really like that it is child appropriate. I would even recommend it to my little brother and I don't do that much because there are a lot of non child friendly story's on here. I hope to see more stories like this from you.
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