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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

This is pretty good and I think you should continue on more! Though, Adam's character doesn't seemed too developed. It's nothing big, it's just he seems like a one-dimenstional character.

Anyway, this is good. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your work.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

This is really good! I swooned with their entrance and kiss. Good job~
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