I liked this. I think it explains in words my image of a "higher-being" I definitely could not have done it. I loved the part where you said "warmth without burning" It captures the warmth of God. My only complaint is that it seemed to lack flow. It wasn't too bad it just made it a little difficult to follow with pace.
Alright, I have never reviewed anything before so.....yeah. I think it was GREAT. I think I especially enjoyed it's progression. It seemed to start off real slow and then eventually picked up in pace and volume. I also enjoyed it because it covers a lot of things that people tend not to bring up (9/11 etc.) and it showed the true face of Capitalistic America. I honestly believe that it was perfect, no constructive criticism here. I hope you make more like this :)
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