I thought this poem was amazing. I never thought something about growing up could sound so beautiful. the lines
"The youth begins his journey into time
And must face the world and its whims,
A world which is often ugly and unkind"
are definitely true. This was very well written and a joy to read. I'm not a big fan of rhyming, but this story had a way of makeing it work. The details made me feel like it was happening to me, in stead of a character. Thanks for sharing, I hope to read more of your writing soon.
i dont know much about world of warcraft but this was hilarious. i like how it says this sweet mage killed six. its contradicting. this song completely made my day and is now stuck in my head.
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