I did finally finish reading the first chapter of Mercy and this is the review I've decided to submit. Over all the first chapter is well written and interesting, revealing a good deal about your characters inside and out. The dialogue is excellently written and the characters are not at all bland. On the other hand you will want to proofread some, there are a few misspellings and some missing words, nothing that destroyed the point ever though. Enjoyable to read and at some point when I have a little more time I plan to read your second chapter.
Thanks for the great read,
C. W. Sherman
Afflixerim Ergo Sum
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