juju's (crinshaw1) Reviews

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#4722434

Review of My life

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I read it-and felt it was dramatic and sad.
There was a misspelling "once" versus 'want", a minor correction, but otherwise good.

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#4722433

Review of My Introduction to the Devil

Review by juju

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

It appears you have studied up on religion. It wasn't a bad read, and I read through the whole thing, I just think this wasn't my cup of tea. I was hesitant about some of the sections, but found myself reading through to see where it was going. It's a deep subject and many have views that will not line up with your story. Please keep is going and add a hook to keep the reader wondering...

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#4720370

Review of Eleanor and Alexander

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Well written. What happened after the cottage?

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#4586531

Review of When COVID Took Over my Junior Year

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hello. I read your entire story- well done. Across the age spectrum as I am almost 60 can honestly say I feel your concern about what and where next year will take you. It may come down to the thoughts on your page that you share years from now with your family..."I remember the pandemic like it was yesterday..." Keep writing and making memories-

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#4586526

Review of Silver Rain: Chapter 1

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (5.0)

ooooh. I love the dialogue- of flirtation...and then how the discussion went on to include the stranger in town.....now they are collaborating on an interest. This is really good. And, I really enjoyed reading what you have written thus far. Keep it going.

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#4566978

Review of Written from Chakras

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (1.0)

Keep writing and editing. It will get better.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4566848

Review of Finding Us

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Good draw. This isn't my thing, but I did think about checking back to see what happens to the teenagers. It has me hoping that there is a positive outcome for both-and worried that in truth, it'll be negative as cancel culture seems to be the new mantra in the media.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4565766

Review of Countdown

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (1.0)

Loss me on why you don't remember numbers any longer- did you die? or had dementia? I read through it twice -I'm sorry, I think this is not my kind of read.

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#4565765

Review of The Tech Guy

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I thought this was going to be boring, but I was clearly wrong. I was cleverly entertained. Loved the play on words and the comparison with the magician. This was written well and was a pleasure reading.

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#4565761

Review of ALEX MAKES A NEW FRIEND

Review by juju

Rated: E

| (3.0)

It was written well for a children's story. I would definitely ensure you had illustrations to go along with the story.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .