WOW! This is awesome! The word flow you use is perfect. I must say that I prefer never to see this day come! The way you used your words and the flow is still outstanding to me. I feel like I was sitting there watching you do all of this. You painted a picture in my head, a picture that is disturbing to look at but its hard not to look at. Good job and keep up the great work!
This is awesome! I think this writing should be seen by more. It's very inspirational and gives the new meaning to life. I agree with your questions you asked. People SHOULD be happy with what they have and reach to get what they want. I found no errors in this. The only thing I can think of is that if I feel like its missing something. I'm not sure what it is, but I know something needs to be added. Keep up the great work my friend!
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