your piece came to me by way of random read & i'm glad it did. i not only relate to the doll personally but i long for some form of courtship with a doll (real & proportionally flawed lady) myself. your poem does a good job creating an image of a very real, complex, & unique character(s) & situation(s).
i don't do many reviews so for what it's worth you have a special ability. thank you for sharing it.
impressive, i get a lot of different thoughts & feelings from this piece. i sense it speaks of the creator, or god & also deals with a goddess dogma & or deity, also the human race as a whole or maybe of a particular generation, it seems somewhat confrontational, as well as awe inspiring toward mother nature. in my opinion it is well written. thank you
The content is of particular interest to me & it's confrontation puts me in check. Thank you for this well written, somewhat elusive, somewhat obscure piece. it reminds me of my stuff...
perhaps i'm a bit intimidated for lack of a better word to comment on a seasoned writers work. that's a compliment if you will as i'm that new to this writing effort. something of an interest that i hope to take on as hobby & healthy habbit. nead more of those. thanks for the example & the inspiration. peace...
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