Aww this is a really cute but really sad. I like how you used analogies and stuff...this is very heart warming and pulls at the heartstrings. Great job
Hello there. I stumbled across the first chapter of your story here and I decided to read it. All I wanted to say is wow. It is really good. I'm not sure if you're a male or female but if you by chance happen to be a female, you caught the male voice very well. This story intrigued me and I would like to read more. Do you have any more on this site or somewhere where I can read it? I would love to read more and see what happens. Does he end up writing the paper? What's up with the girlfriend? You left me wondering all of this and I think that makes a great writer so good for you! I hope you respond back but if not, good luck with the rest of the story and happy writing!
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