Oh my, I read this story and cried. It is nice to know that sometimes stories have a reason behind them and lessons to be learned. I Love the description, wording and the way you stay focused all through the story. Curious though, you gonna write another story like this? I enjoyed it.
This is a very heartfelt poem.I shows that there is so much love in you. You also so much compassion in your writing. The ending to the poem just sits perfect with the ending. I think this would be good for a love story. I really think this is a great poem. I like it when people show the love they feel and mean it. Thank you for sharing.
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