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Review of The Battle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
the person step dad seems really mean. maybe your mother should break up with him, before you know it, it will be family violence.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
what does it mean by " i've seen the colors you have represented." ?
To me it really confusing.
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Review of Lonley Sight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
i like the rhyming in it, and it sounds like the man has no life ahah.
it needs to be more longer, way more longerr.
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Review of ‎01-22-10  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
really good choice in words, it sound really good i think it need to be alittle bit more longer
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Review of I miss...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
Its really sweet but i dont like how it starts off in every sentence with i miss.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
this is really sad im guess the cat die. I know how it feels i lost my dog and i was really sad.:(
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i really do like it, its kinda intense.
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Review of Doctor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
it make no sense to me really.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
this poem is really good, i liked it and really understood it
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Review of Little One  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
i dont like how every other staza starts off the same, but other then that its really good.
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Review of The List  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like the idea but it needs more details.
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Review of Shadows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like all the details you put in this it has a haunting tone but at the same time it's very pretty to me like trees in the winter time. I feel like your last line isn't really an ending though I feel like it just hangs open. Overall all I like the tone and sense of this.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like how you talked about this addiction then you show this person getting help. I really like the line where he first asks a question and it is answer it shows him trying to get better and a change in the questioning trend. I felt like you kind of changed the point of view around a little after you stop asking the questions frequently though. Overall I really like this.
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Review of A tragic accident  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I needs more detail! It's a good concept but the descriptions need a little more. Describe her fear of not knowing if that friend was alright. The despair on the car ride to the hospital.
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Review of Crimson Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
good choice i words i really really do like this, i really the part when it say "Howls ring through the night and the blood moon glows into the sky,"
in the 4th line the same thought from the third line is being carried on so why'd you capitalize the 4th line?
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Review of Gangsta D's Anger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I wish it was a little bit more longer, it kinda relates to me as it does you buddy.
i really like the last staza, i wish you wouldve put what kinda help you need
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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i love how the fourth line is written, it sound really good and goes with the title.
i believe this poem has to do a lot about judgement, but it was really good i like it, it made me feel really good inside. :)
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