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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
It was extremely well written and surprisingly lenghthy which is a very good thing because i never myself manage to write more than 30 lines of rhyming poetry. It was very descriptive, and very...true. Improve by trying to get your lines to rhyme line-to-line or line-to-skip a line-line or like a limerick; its just my suggestion that people usually keep interested and absorbed in a rapping or rhyming tune which carries them forward into the poem. Cheers!
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