Hi there,
Very well written poem. The poem vests on the deep rooted controversial philosophy of moving on in life.
Keep up the good work.
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Regards
Maverick
Well written and nice allocation of phrases. The strong word "Mask" makes its presence felt throughout the entire poem.
Keep up the good work.
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Regards
Maverick
Nice thought and good selection of words. But I think you need some spell check to do as you have spelled "merely reality" wrongly. Overall a good writing. Keep up the good work.
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Regards
Maverick
Well versed though at times I lost the rythm. The distasteful experience of getting dejected has been well potrayed in the poem. However in my humble opinion "Said a mighty “f*** you” could have been substituted by some other suitable phrase.
Well written. Keep up the good work.
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Regards
Maverick.
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