I really loved this poem. The perfect image of an affectionate and patient dog waiting for his/her master. You really captured that essence. Great work. Jealous of people who can write poems!
Wow this is an awesome poem. I stink at poetry and especially rhyming, and I love the combination of A-Z and rhyming motif. On top of that, you took a really inventive take on this prompt. Great job!
Thanks again for reviewing my story. I loved this story of yours-- beautiful, haunting and the words washed over me. The only thing I would like more of is the main character's reaction to the girl's story. Great imagery, I felt the man's pain as he goes through discovering what actually happened. Thanks for sharing.
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