Nunya's (cjwitt) Reviews

Nunya

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#4420623

Review of When are you leaving?

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I Chose your poem from the read a newbie section.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I could feel the emotion in this poem. I also enjoyed the way it made me try to figure out where the story teller is and why they are leaving.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me feel optimistic. I also felt anxiety that comes with change.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I enjoyed reading your poem. It made me think and I could feel emotion in it.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing. Feel free to stop by my Portfolio and read some of my work.

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#4412068

Review of Gone

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4412067

Review of My Role Model, My Mother

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a newbie area and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the concise stanza's. They were poignant and gave the poem a punch. The way they were written gave off a hostile vibe and stirred emotions in me to that regard. I could also feel the anguish behind the writing.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought this poem was well written. It was easy to read and I found nothing in it to trip me up. The message was easy to understand and the flow of the poem carried me from start to finish. It painted a picture for me and that created emotion. Everything you want a poem to do. Good Job.

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#4412066

Review of The Carousel Rides

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4411060

Review of Toressa

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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This is a lovely song. I enjoyed reading it. It painted a picture in my mind and stored emotion in me as well. I did notice a couple possible typos. In the second verse

I see you face, as soft as lace
Maybe should be I see your face, as soft as lace.

The fifth verse

close my eyes and hear your sights
Maybe should be close my eyes and hear your sighs.

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#4410678

Review of ANNIVERSARY TO MISERY

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

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This is definitly an emotionally charged piece. I can feel the hurt in your writing. The image this poem creates for me is a darker one. One of sadness and almost one of regret. Nothing lasts forever and even bad situations have a way of working themselves out. Not always for the best but it’s important to remember that today’s tragedies are tomorrow’s memories. Nothing more.

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#4410676

Review of Seasons Change

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Rated: E

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I liked the rhythm of this poem. The rhyme scheme was enjoyable. I enjoyed reading it and it did a good job at creating a mental image I could work with. Every season does have its proper place and I too can find something enjoyable in each one. Warm lazy summer days, cool crisp autumn nights. Fresh fallen snow in the winter or the smell of spring. Each it’s own wonder.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Nunya

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#4410541

Review of " I Will Wait For You "

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing. Feel free to stop by my Portfolio and read some of my work.

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#4410536

Review of An Individual Notion: Togetherness

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the review section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4410221

Review of The Antique Store

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose your poem from the read a newbie section. The title is what caught my interest

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the flow of this poem. It was very smooth and easy to read. I got from start to finish with very little effort and the poem painted a very clear mental image for me. I almost felt as if I was in the antique shop looking at things. It is a very unique but true look at these types of places.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me feel like I was at the location with the author. It reminded me of times I've gone browsing through antique shops.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall this poem was well written. There was little to trip me up and the words flowed well and carried me through the poem from start to finish. The imagery was good and I was able to visit the location in my mind. Good Job.

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#4409805

Review of "Boots of Bellfonte"

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the review section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. I liked the 11-8-11-8 rhyme scheme. It moved through my head like a song while I was reading it. It's a touching story. Good job.

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#4409625

Review of Autumn leaves

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4409623

Review of untitled

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Rated: 13+

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the way you conveyed the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem touched me emotionally because I feel the same why a lot of times. Best down by society. I could sit here and tell you to fight back but that doesn’t Work. Not if you aren’t willing to confirm. Society will beat you every time. What you need to do is figure out a way to live for you. To shut all the crap out and love whonyou are and what you do. Then, nothing can touch you. Nothing can bring you down.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4409339

Review of A letter from a daughter

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose this piece from your portfolio because of the title.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:This poem touched me deeply. I had a hard time reading it to be honest. It touched really close to home for me.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem painted a vivid picture in my mind and played hard on my emotions.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:I love this poem. That's all I can say.

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#4409337

Review of Pain

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose this piece to review because it is the last one I read in your portfolio. I will try to get to them all.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I really liked this poem. It is how depression makes me feel a lot of the time too. I feel pain that I want to go away but I don't want to put it on anyone else so I suffer alone. It is a horrible thing, depression. It's a faceless, unrelenting monster that stays with you always, if one form or another.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Surprisingly this piece lifted my spirits. I guess it's because you hit the nail on the head so to speak and your writing spoke to me.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:I liked your poem. It stirred feelings in me, it made me think, and it was a smooth read. All put together this poem left me with no feeling of in-completion. It painted a good mental picture for me and touched me. Good job.

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#4408422

Review of The Final Voyage

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Rated: ASR

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose this piece because I was encouraged to check your port on the newsfeed and this one caught my eye.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:what didn’t I like. Excellent rhyming, excellent meter. Just excellent. This poem read itself to me. I all I had to do was look at the first line and it took hold of my eyes and guided them through the piece. It also painted a vivid image in my mind that was very similar to the prompt image.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem played on a few different emotions for me. I felt sorry for the poor woman riding with the ferryman. I felt curiosity, what did she do to get there. And oddly enough, I felt calmness. The flow of the writing almost soothed me in the face of such eternally sad prospects.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:I loved your poem. Hands down, flat out. It’s a wonderful piece of writing worthy of any acclaim it’s sure to receive. Thank you for writing it.

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#4408195

Review of Death of Strength

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Rated: 13+

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more. Your poem also gave me a feeling of sorrow. I could feel the struggle going on within you. It's hard to convince yourself that death isn't a better option. I've been there. The pros outweigh the cons, but, death will come sooner or later, so I've convinced myself to see what the world can bring. It has brought me peace. I hope that if this poem is a reflection of your inner struggle, you can peak your curiosity too.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4407937

Review of Ducks in the Pond

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found it in the review a newbie section and the description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked your poem because it was just a short little blurb or “som silly fun” as you called it, but it was still descriptive.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:It was nice to read a quick little jot of a piece of someone’s everyday life. Sometimes this can be more personal than a long thought out poem.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:I liked it.

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#4407936

Review of My Mind

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the message in your poem. I liked the way you told the story and guided me from start to finish though it.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem left me feeling complete. You had a beginning and an end so I wasn’t left wanting more.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I thought your poem was well written and easy to read. It told me a story and painted a picture in my mind. Good job.

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#4407935

Review of How could you

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose to read your poem because I found it in the read a Newbie section and the title and description caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I thought your poem moved well from beginning to end and it told a clear story thatnwas easy to follow and understand. It incited emotion in me which is also something you want a poem to do.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:First of all I want to say thank you for sharing this very personal story. The emotion in your poem is very strong and I can feel it in your writing. I liked the way you ended the poem. You have no reason to suffer because of someone else’s decision. You are the one who has the beautiful daughter and you are the one who gets to experience all the wonders of watching her grow up. That is your reward for going through what you did.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall your poem moved me and made me think. It painted a picture in my mind and I saw it more than read it. Great job.

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#4407654

Review of A Concrete Jungle

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose your poem because it was in the read a newbie section.The title caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the imagery in your poem. It painted a picture in my mind from the opening stanza. I could see the towering buildings on the city skyline.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me feel a little in awe of the size of the buildings I was envisioning. It also made me feel very small in comparison to the vastness of the buildings.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I enjoyed your poem. It was a smooth read from start to finish and it told your story well. I didn't see any errors with it and I can't think of any suggestions I could make for improvement. Good job.

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#4407589

Review of Animal Cruelty

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in the read a Newbie section and both the title and discription caught my attention.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:as a poem I thought it had a nice flow and rhymes. It moved well from start to finish. The subject touched my heart though.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me both angry and sad. I see people from time to time who do this to their “pets”. The are forever locked up. I knew some people who had 2 huskies as “pets”. They spent their whole life locked in kennels in the back yard. I asked one “why don’t you let them out to run around?” They said, we can’t, they can be vicious. Really? I wonder why.

Notice I said ‘knew’.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I liked your poem. It read well and left me emotionally affected which is what us poets really want to do, isn’t it. Great job.

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#4407369

Review of social illusions

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I found your poem in your portfolio. It was right there so I read it.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the rhyme scheme. The poem flows well from start to finish. It wasn’t difficult to read and the terminology used was very modern with references to Facebook and Instagram among others. This engaged me.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:Your poem gave me imagery of today’s society with their faces stuck in their cell phones. Wanting to be something they think everyone else wants them to be.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope you like it here at WDC and I hope you share some more of your writing. Come check out our group too. It’s a great place to start.

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#4407291

Review of Aradia's Broom

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Rated: 13+

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOSE THIS PIECE:I chose to read your poem because I found it in the review section and the discription looked interesting.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I like that the poem told a story. I will admit I’m not exactly sure what about

, but I was able to follow it and got into it as much as I could.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me feel like there was a sort of monumental conflict going on. Like the main ‘character’ of the piece was on the edge of making some kind of decision.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:Overall I enjoyed reading this poem. I did notice there are a couple stanzas that open with quotes but don’t end with them. I’m not sure if this is intentional. Also the 6th stanza kind of tripped me up with the last line. These, of course are just my opinions and nothing takes away from my enjoyment of our poem. Great job.

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#4407279

Review of The lonely waitress

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Rated: E

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Hi. I’m CJ and I’m reviewing your work in association with the Newbies + Poetry Group.

WHY I CHOOSE THIS PIECE:I chose to read this poem because I saw it on the newsfeed and it looked interesting.

WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT:I liked the imagery it created for me. I could see myself sitting in a diner, could see the server you are speaking about. Appearing happy and carefree on the outside but with sadness in her eyes.

HOW THIS PIECE MADE ME FEEL:This poem made me feel sorry for the server in the diner. The story you told felt completed when I got to the end of the piece.

OVERALL IMPRESSION:I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed well, I had no trouble getting from start to finish and I was left feeling satisfied at the end. Good Job.

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Nunya

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