WONDERFUL!!!! All men should read this. As a woman, I feel, a father should read this story to his young boys to help mold them into the character of what masculinity truly is. It would help to make the better husbands, fathers, and friends. There were one or two mistakes in grammar (which is so hard for me), but when you publish this story, the editors will correct the grammar.
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