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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a pretty good poem :) One thing I did notice about it that I might suggest working on was how difficult it is for the reader to understand the message this poem is trying to convey. A lot of the lines seem completely unrelated to the ones before and after them. Other than that I enjoyed it!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoy the descriptive language you use here. Some of the line breaks are kind of choppy, though this can emphasize the effect. This poem is hard to understand in places, but a lot of that comes from the complex language used. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
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