Truly this is an interesting piece. I observe that events do seem not crafted well to conclusive end. I like the style but the author could do without too much of hyperbole. It is a good piece that is amusing and worths its salt.
It is philosophical, full of suspence, and it is interesting to read. Though it is hunurous but at the expense of its theme. The gurus exist nowhere except inside you. What then is the essence of the Unity Church. Is it part of the lesson to learn?
In any case it is educative end instructive. Good piece.
The narration is a true description of life. Life is a mixture of sorrow and joy. Husband and wife coming from different background is normal; it teaches harmony and makes marriage intresting. The strange part is why the mother and others never mourned the death of the father. It is a tragicomedy story. It ended on a good note and beatiful piece of writing.
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