I came to this poem from a link in your other item. And I am so glad that I did! You have added another intregueing installment to your wonderful series! I like this poem very much. The word choice is perfect and really gives the poem a certain atmosphere.Overall I like reading your creations and this was another great piece. Good Job
I like all of your stories. The Lansing investigations are great!!And this excerpt is another wonderful addition to your series! I like how you have all of the links to the other items on this page it is very handy for a potential reader to have them all at their fingertips. This is very organized and I think it is very well written.
Good
WOW another incredibly intense piece from you!
This is a perfect addition to the story and it fits perfectly. The best part about it i think is the precise placement of the words. You have avoided any explicit remarks and yet we know exactly what is going on. Overall another perfect piece!
perfect I enjoyed reading it much much much much much much and much more!! this is a great poem that really is truthful to life and the feel is wonderful!!
You have really done wonders with this poem!!
Good job and talent
This is a really good poem!! the content is interesting and I really enjoyed reading it. No spelling errors or anything like that so that is good!
I think that this is a great poem with wonderful vocabulary and a superb meaning!!
Another great story!!! you really haave a gift with writing...hehe!
This story is a serious and good story.
Good writing and punctuation had some problems but that is OKAY
me likey like this one too
hello toaksie,
You asked me to review this poem and so here i am:
This is wonderful. i really like the descriptions and the feel of the characters. the romance is wonderful and i think this is a really good poem!!!gooood job:)
Write on
chikfrog
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