This is a powerful work. The rhyme hold the content together well. With two more line after line eight to rhyme with seven and eight, this would be a beautiful Shakespearean sonnet.. This deserves to be recognized as the narrators words are from a time long ago. The reader does not get an opportunity to see many written with these words from those days.
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