I thought this was a good poem. Though I was confused some. I was kind of confused about the title. I was thinking maybe trying to clean up your rhyming. Other than that the poem is very enjoyable to read. I hope you keep writing and hope that I will get read some more of your pieces.
I really loved your poem. I think you truly captured the concept of hope and how there are many ways to go by it. To me I can just image all of these different concepts and how people go through each one. I think you should continue with this kind of poetry because you are truly good at it.
WOW! That was awesome. I love your poem. What you wrote about really describes music in an unique way. It also show the true colors of music. I really enjoyed reading it.
I agree with your poem. Tough love is good. Your poem clearly brings that point across and lets the audience know the strong feeling for this subject of tough love. I really enjoy the rhyming it really ties the poem together.
This was a really entertaining story. I loved the little love story going on. You should add more into it. Make it longer. Turn it into a book it is that good
Your poem really hit the point you tried to get across. I saw the greed and the self-interest you mentioned in your description. It was a real eye opening read and you should do more poems like this one.
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