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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I read your poem and I am so sorry your childhood memory is not a happy one.

Your poem is well constructed, dark and complicated but something many can resonate with, including myself. Amazing how our suicidal thoughts start so young, isn't it?

I hope you are doing well now and have found or created memories or life you enjoy.
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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the imagery that takes place in this poem. I mean I don't love that there being a fire in Baltimore, but that you gave a clear picture as to what was happening. I great ode to the heroic firemen who were there fighting that fire as well.

Great Poem!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I appreciate this poem as a painter! It perfectly describes how I feel like what I am doing as I am painting.

It is well animated and flows evenly. My favorite part is at the end ' you've left for others to ponder on.' as it very much completes the poem.

Well done!
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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story held an interesting contrast of a woman in a relationship with a man in modern day NeW York and a developing relationship of that in Viking times.

I found the contrast to be extremely interesting!
Although the behaviors to the Vikings bewildered and confused me, what confused me more is how 'Valerie King' said yes at the end.

As a heavyset person in modern day, it is not easy dealing with people's commentary. It was neat to read about a time where this particular body type was desired, however definitely still wouldn't want to be treated in such a barbaric way.

All in all it was a fun read. Thanks for sharing!
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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! What an intense story of communication with your loved ones that have passed.

Ouija is so...it's so much! Not much in this or other worlds spook me, but ouija does!
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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Clever story with a little bit of humor at the end!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Powerful!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Deep and horrifying!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Way to go on your sobriety! Great way to express what you went through.
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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting... Tell me more!
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Review of To My Wife  Open in new Window.
Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Incredible way to express your love to your wife. Bravo!
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Review by C. Sykes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love it! Also,T he fact you are not a native English speaker and can still articulate your point so we'll, bravo!
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