A beuatiful peice, to which I felt much emotion when I read. I can really see this as an amazing song - and you can picture the woman singing to her lover as you read or hear it. I would love to be able to listen to it, to get the full effect, which is unfortunately not possible on writing.com. However, I was still very impressed, and my only critique is the layout of your writing, which at some moments seemed awquard and ill-fit with the rest of the scheme. However, if I were to hear this peice as a composition, this of course would not matter, so it is still a wonderful peice. Lots of emotion, and a real treat in the maze of writing.com - lolz. Thankyou for sharing it with everyone.
Thankyou for a very helpful article, which cleared my mind in many aspects of writing.com statistical information. However, I thought that it was a little difficult to read, considering the fact that I suffer from reading difficulty in the form of dyslexia. I therefore found my attention drifting to other things at some points. In comparison to other such articles, however, it was a lot easier to read and understand, covering many key factors of review use (etc). I also found the section dividers and clear paragraphing to be very helpful. The colouraton was as added bonus, because colour helps with my dyslexia. Thanks again for a very helpful article.
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