I think this is beautiful. It's very rare I see people who write to inspire and you nailed it. Fear prevents us from being who we are at our fullest capacity. And not only do you convey it's obstacles, you encourage by showing that there are things to enjoy at little cost which we cannot do in a shell. I appreciate when you say, be unreserved in love. It's this we all struggle with that prevents us from the biggest joy in life. Thank you.
I really enjoyed this. I think you explained why we keep persuing relationships that seem doomed. Because there's always that hope. It's bittersweet but sometimes we find it and when we don't and the time it takes to happen are as dark and hard as you've displayed in your tone. Well done
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