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Review of The Game  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
that story is absolutely amazing! No wonder you won a prize! When I usually see a story of the same length as yours I do not usually take the time to read it - I know, bad habit - however, this time I read yours because the part that I read in the beginning was so captivating and filled with suspense that it was ustopable! It is unfortunate about what happened to your neighbours when you were small but at least something good came out of the experience. Please keep writing. You should expect to see many more reviews and emails from me, I absolutely love this story and I hope that there are many more to come.
Elpzy
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Rated: E | (4.5)
that is the most amazing poem i have ever heard.
it is magnificent. there is always room for improvement. it is extreemly touching and just plain old cool
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Review of The Wait  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
that is an amazing story!
try to hold an equal amount per paragraph
i believe that there is always room for improvement
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